Archive | July 2017

If You Don’t Care About Grammar, You Don’t Care About Writing…

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By Lisa Brown  on Just Publishing Advice site:

There are many articles and blog posts out there with grammar mistakes. Some of those mistakes are not as bad as others, but are unnecessary and attentive writers can easily avoid them. A writer who does not spend time correcting grammar mistakes does not care about the quality of the content and therefore, does not care about writing. If you speak to any passionate author or writer, you can be assured that there is a process that takes place after the first draft is written.

With all the tools available to us these days, you can find help for just about any part of your writing. You can find grammar checkers and even an article summary generator. There is no excuse for poor grammar anymore, even if you are not writing in your native language, although I do recommend you write in…

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Milele Safari: An Eternal Journey by Jan Hawke

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Milele Safari: An Eternal Journey by Jan Hawke

My review follows Hawke’s book blurb found on Amazon.

“Milele Safari – An Eternal Journey …twines around a single day, in an unremarkable border village that snuffs out the lives of four people and shatters many others, only to draw the survivors back to a different time and, perhaps, a hope of atonement and peace. Step out on the journey and discover an Africa that could have been, is and might one day come to be.

This book deals with strong adult themes, including genocide and war rape. It is therefore NOT suitable for persons under the age of 18, or of a sensitive disposition.”

From the beginning, this book was intriguing. I must admit that I was at a loss (book started out from a human point of view) when suddenly a leopard took center stage and the point of view switched from a human to an animal. Next thing I knew the point of view was from a safari driver who knew he would bring his group back to the kill site of the leopard and her cubs. Until now, I had never read a book such as to the likes of this one, and I find this highly unusual. For those readers who thrive on stories that come from a zillion different points of view and time, then this is a book for you! For me it was confusing with all the different points in time and points of view. This is an adult read for sure, and Hawke does have an interesting way of writing. For me, having suffered a head injury, I found the story line quite difficult and had to put the book down due to receiving a headache in the process. I could only read parts at a time as I was so lost in the story line.  The back has a reference section for African words and with the eBook (the version I read) you could click a link and see what each word meant. This was hard for me to read this way and I think a reader would do much better with a paperback version. Hawke wrote an extremely well-written book, great imagery, and depth. Heads Up: If you suffer from a brain injury in the past, this book is not for you. I give three stars due to the issues of no warning for those with brain injuries and how hard it was to follow.

 

Book Review: ‘The Hearts Journey Home’ by Natalie Ducey. Poetry For The Hungry Heart.

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Hello and welcome to my review of “The Hearts Journey Home.” By Natalie Ducey.

Meet Natalie.

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 With a BA in Psychology, Natalie has had the privilege of working in the counselling field for approximately 15 years. Through her work and personal journey, she has witnessed the remarkable power of the human spirit.

In her own words she explains, “The potential of the human spirit has always amazed me. Through poetry, I try to capture the essence of the fragility and the resiliency of our hearts – the brilliant beauty of life’s journey. I believe we are connected by similar and relatable experiences. We all love/loved deeply and most likely have been on both sides of goodbye. We know the exquisite and profound beauty of love. We know the immobilizing force of grief and the anguish between letting go and holding on. We know the acute distinction between second chances and…

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Eight Steps to Establishing Your Author Brand

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Ciao, SEers. I’m just getting back into the groove after a long overdue trip back to the homeland. No, not Italy, although that’s on my bucket list. We went back to Pennsylvania to celebrate my daughter’s high school graduation with the extended family. A great time was had by all. We extended our trip, which put me even further behind, but it is worth it to see loved ones, even if we ran ourselves ragged.

Anyway…

Who are you?My series on creating a media kit seemed to be helpful to writers, so I thought I’d discuss something that coordinates with the media kit—author branding. Having worked for several years as a corporate identity specialist in my “real” job, those principles are transferrable and I want to give you a quick checklist that might help you out.

So, without further ado, here are eight steps to author branding cohesion.

1. You Are…

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This entry was posted on July 12, 2017. 2 Comments

Colorado July 2017

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Lake at Nederland, Colorado

We (hubby included) were in Colorado the last few days and I decided to share a few memories that we made while there in this most beautiful state. We had great weather as you can see. 

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Another View of Lake at Nederland, Colorado

We enjoyed a few sprinkles one day and that served up intense scents of the pines and other trees and plants. 

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High Country Vista

This shot was near Rollins Pass, and Rollinsville. I wish you all could have been with us. 

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Full Moon

Needless to say, but I will say it regardless, is the fact that a full moon rose as we headed for home. The perfect way to end a brief respite from everyday life. 

This entry was posted on July 11, 2017. 4 Comments

Science-Fiction Films of the 1930s: Frankenstein

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The movie that I will discuss in this installment is Frankenstein.  This 1931 film was directed by James Whale and produced by Carl Laemelle, Jr. Universal Studios was following up its huge success with Dracula earlier in the year, so this film seemed like a natural choice to make. I have posted on Frankenstein before in my series on horror films, but like its namesake novel, it can also been seen as early science-fiction.

While the title and characters come from the 1818 Mary Shelley novel, it is a loose adaptation of the text.  Interestingly, the sequel, The Bride of Frankenstein, is a much more faithful treatment of the novel than this first film. This movie, one of the most important in horror film history, introduces Boris Karloff as the Creature. Karloff gives an impressive performance as the lost and lonely being who is unsure of who he…

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This entry was posted on July 8, 2017. 2 Comments

Keywords in reviews.

lizziechantree's avatarLizzie Chantree

Like most authors, I am learning new things about the publishing industry every day and try to share what I learn here, in the hope it helps other writers, book lovers and bloggers. I have been looking at keywords and good ways to use them, but had no idea that reviews count as keywords too!

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For example:

Review 1:

A lovely read. I enjoyed the characters immensely and the way the author used description really drew me in. This is a book I would recommend to friends as I couldn’t wait to get back to my kindle to read the next chapter!

(Reviews literally take 5 minutes to write and 2 sentences is plenty, although a detailed description is wonderful too. They are the first place readers look to discover a new read and are really helpful to both author and reader.)

Review 2: A review from one of my readers…

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This entry was posted on July 8, 2017. 4 Comments

Commas and how to use them (Part 2)

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Hello SErs! It’s Harmony again with part 2 on Commas and how to use them. If you missed Part 1, you can find it HERE. Last time, we looked at Listing (Standard or Oxford), Introductory, and Joining commas. Today, we cover the Gapping, Bracketing, and other comma uses.

The Gapping Comma

We use a gapping comma to show that we have left out one or more words when the missing words would simply repeat the words used earlier in the same sentence. See the following:

Some Norwegians wanted to base their national language on the speech of the capital city; others, on the speech of the rural countryside.

The gapping comma here shows that the words ‘wanted to base their national language’, which you might have repeated, have instead been omitted.

The following example contains both listing and gapping commas:

Italy is famous for her composers and musicians…

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