Dark Eyes

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A former Russian ballerina and a police photographer, destined to be lovers, seek to unfold the murder mystery of two women…

DARK EYES…Anya, an unwed mother of a mentally challenged child, meets Andrei, at a murder scene. They strive to unravel the murders of a hotel worker and a doll-seller with a link to diamond smuggling in Soviet Leningrad.

The offbeat couple, in jeopardy, are stalked by a vicious detective with possible involvement in the murders, and in a taut reversal, the hunted become the hunters.

My Review:

Wow. This novel contains characters of the time of Stalin. Life was hard for so many, and as I read, I felt like the trials and tribulations, the fear and the love, the entire gambit for this time in the 50s. Backstabbing and fights, cleverness in hiding diamonds, and willing to help others to safety.

This entry was posted on June 29, 2023. 1 Comment

The Hussar’s Duty

Book Title: The Hussar’s Duty

Series: The Winged Warrior Series

Author: Griffin Brady

Publication Date: May 18, 2023

Publisher: Trefoil Publishing

Page Length: 538

Genre: Historical Fiction

Twitter Handle: @griffbrady1588 @cathiedunn

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Book Title and Author Name:

The Hussar’s Duty

by Griffin Brady

Blurb:

Poland’s most valiant winged hussar is called to fight in a campaign ripe for disaster. But he must also protect those he loves from jackals waiting to pounce. How does he choose between duty and devotion when death is on the line?

When Sultan Osman II sends Poland’s envoy packing, the Commonwealth must prepare for war against one of the largest armies the Ottomans have ever assembled. Tasked with repelling the invasion is Grand Hetman of the Crown Stanisław Żółkiewski, and he knows who to turn to: Jacek Dąbrowski, the Commonwealth’s most valiant Polish winged hussar.

Jacek has been idle far too long, and the call to arms is a siren’s song he can’t resist. But he has built a life far from the battlefield with his wife, Oliwia, and their children. If he pursues his quest for glory, who will safeguard them?

Oliwia knows her husband is restless. In fact, she’s been sending Jacek on cross-country errands for years in the hopes of quelling his lust for battle. When she realizes her efforts are futile, she resolves herself to letting him go—after hatching a scheme to accompany him.

Honor. Obligation. Devotion. These forces push and pull Jacek in different directions. His country needs him, but so does his family. Where does his duty lie? His choice will cause catastrophic ripples no matter which path he follows … and could very well bring the loss of his loved ones or his life.

Will the cost of defending king and country prove too steep for this warrior?

This is a standalone continuation in The Winged Warrior Series.

When Angels Fly

(Guest post linked to the series)

(With a lovely name like “When Angels Fly,” I had to go with a guest post about the Polished winged hussars’ most notable feature, their wings!)

When I think of the Polish Winged Hussars, many adjectives leap to my mind at once: Fierce. Flamboyant. Intimidating. Boisterous. Honorable. Savage. God-fearing. They walked with a swagger that came from knowing they were the best and they might die in the next battle.

Besides their prowess on the battlefield, though, what set them apart visually were those magnificent wings! Sadly, like their long hollow lances, they weren’t built to last, and most did not survive the ravages of time. The evidence of their existence can be found in paintings and sketches and the scant extant samples that did make it.

Did they really wear them, and why? According to narratives penned by those who witnessed the mighty hussars charging into an enemy line, the horsemen did sometimes wear them into battle. The wings might have been a single one attached to the back of a saddle or the iconic curved pair bolted to their backplates that curled above a warrior’s head.

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While experts agree the wings existed, how exactly they evolved and their purpose are even trickier questions. No one knows for sure, and in a rush to explain their existence, theory and conjecture abound.

To explore their possible origin, let’s travel back briefly to the 16th century to the rise of the hussars. After the Union of Lublin, which formed the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth in 1569, the Commonwealth’s southern borders came under attack from the Ottoman Empire. The Serbian and Hungarian territories were conquered, but a new type of soldier, a combination of Serbian and Hungarian, survived and soon would thrive in Poland: the hussar. The word hussar, in fact, harkens back to húsz, meaning twenty. It’s believed that the first hussars came from ranks of peasants, where one out of twenty was recruited into service.

The Hungarian hussar was armored, but the Serbian was not. The Serbians, however, carried a light lance and an asymmetrical shield with a wing painted on it, like the fine fellow below. The Polish Winged Hussar is a combination of the two.

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In 1576, Stefan Bathory, a Transylvanian prince, was elected king of Poland. It was he who standardized the Poles’ equipment so it matched his personal guard of Transylvanian and Hungarian hussars, giving rise to the Polish Winged Hussars. The shields were abandoned in favor of heavier armor, and the wings became more than artwork.

So why did they adopt the wings?

Some theorize they donned them because the noise would have frightened enemy horses. But consider that the thunder of their hoofbeats as they charged at an enemy line would have drowned out the sound.

Others speculate the wings made it difficult for Tatars to get a lasso around their torsos and drag them off their horses. If you’ve read The Heart of a Hussar, you know I like that theory myself, though history offers no proof.

How about psychological warfare as a reason for wearing the wings? It’s hard to know what effect the visual of those shuddering wings would have had on enemy horses, but it must have been terrifying to be a soldier on the front line while a wall of winged cavalrymen was bearing down. Not only would the defender have seen the horrifying sight coming at him, he would have felt the vibration of the hoofbeats through the ground. The hussars would have appeared larger than life, like archangels.

Given their deep sense of religion, I imagine the hussars would have taken pride in being compared to archangels. They certainly lived and breathed the notion that they were the “Bulwark of Christendom,” fighting for their Catholic God and country.

Another explanation for the wings has nothing to do with battle. Some surmise they were one more accoutrement that bespoke the splendor of the hussar and were worn mainly for parades and the like. In other words, it might have been plain old vanity. These men were peacocks, and they dressed in their finery before meeting the enemy on the battlefield, so the theory definitely has merit.

Whatever the reason, the wings set the Polish Winged Hussars apart from other cavalry of their day and lend them an air of timelessness that continues to fascinate.

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Author Bio:

Griffin Brady is an award-winning historical fiction author with a keen interest in the Polish Winged Hussars of the 16th and 17th centuries. She is a member of the Historical Novel Society and Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. Her debut novel, The Heart of a Hussar, was a finalist for the 2021 Chaucer Early Historical Fiction Award and a 2021 Discovered Diamond.

The proud mother three grown sons, she lives in Colorado with her husband. She is also an award-winning bestselling romance author who writes under the pen name G.K. Brady.

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Website: https://www.griffin-brady.com/historical-fiction/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/griffbrady1588

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Amazon Author Page: https://www.amazon.com/author/griffinbrady

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20675881.Griffin_Brady

This entry was posted on June 29, 2023. 2 Comments

The Douglas Bastard

Book Title: The Douglas Bastard   

Series: Archibald the Grim Series

Author: J R Tomlin

Publication Date:  April 26, 2022

Page Length: 185

Genre: Historical Fiction, Scottish Historical Fiction

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Book Title and Author Name:

The Douglas Bastard

Archibald the Grim Series

J R Tomlin

Blurb:

Young Archibald, the Black Douglas’s bastard son, returns from exile to a Scotland ravaged by war. The war-hardened Knight of Liddesdale will teach him what he must learn. And with danger on every side, he must learn to sleep with one eye open and a claymore in his hand because even their closest ally may betray them…

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The Douglas Bastard:

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Archibald the Grim Series on Amazon:

Amazon UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0BDW1VJ61

Amazon US:  https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0BDW1VJ61

Author Bio:

Older Caucasian woman leaning on rock writing in journal

J R Tomlin is the author of twenty historical novels.

Her historical novels are mainly set in Scotland. You can trace her love of that nation to the stories of Robert the Bruce and the Black Douglas that her grandmother read her when she was small and to her hillwalking through the Scottish Cairngorms where the granite mountains have a gorgeous red glow under the setting sun.

In addition to having lived in Scotland, she has traveled in the US, mainland Europe and the Pacific Rim. She now lives in Oregon.

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Website: www.jrtomlin.com 

Twitter: https://twitter.com/TomlinJeanne

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Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4094154.J_R_Tomlin

This entry was posted on June 23, 2023. 2 Comments

16 Query Tips From Literary Agents

When your manuscript is polished, your query letter honed to perfection and you’re ready to contact agents about representing your baby, you still aren’t done. Each agent you contact will have unique requirements, personal favorites as to how to oil your manuscript so it slips smoothly through the gears of their application process.

Trust me as a veteran of the query process–they’re all different. Visit an agent’s website. Check out their requirements before submitting. Spend the time to make each contact personal to the agent’s requirements, area of expertise, and current successful publications.

Here’s an example of what  3 Seas Agency requires. They’re good, basic rules that make sense when seeking representation:

In General:

  1. Your manuscript needs a header on each page. It should include the title, the author’s name and the page number. (Note: If you wish, the page number can be inserted at the bottom of the page.)
  2. Make sure your entire book flows.
  3. Avoid overuse of flashbacks.
  4. A slow-moving beginning turns off agents and editors. Write a beginning hook to suck in the reader. Use action rather than narrative.
  5. Make sure the climax isn’t resolved too easily. Be certain to tie up all loose ends that may have drifted throughout your story.
  6. Double-check for grammatical errors, such as misspelled or repeated words and sentence structure.
  7. Do not use unusual words more than once in your entire manuscript. A reader will remember them and be pulled out of the story if you repeat them.

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Common Manuscript Errors:

  1. Improper use of the word — its.
  2. Toward is preferred over towards.
  3. Overuse of the word: that. Read and then read again all sentences which contain the word “that.” Many, many times “that” can be omitted, or the word “which” can be substituted. Sometimes, however, “that” is necessary and must remain in the sentence. Only by reading the sentence out loud and concentrating on it will you be able to delete all unnecessary usage. HINT: use the “find” for locating all of the times you used “that” in your manuscript.
  4. Sprinkle contractions throughout your manuscript in dialogue, inner monologue and narrative. You will notice how the words flow better immediately. NOTE: we talk using contractions, therefore, your characters should too.
  5. Name Dropping: be sure not to keep repeating a character’s name over and over in a paragraph or even on a page. When more than one character appears in a scene, it’s sometimes necessary to repeat names.
  6. Dialogue is Not Conversation: there is no room for bad dialogue in a good manuscript. Dialogue’s only purpose is to move the story along. If it doesn’t, and it sounds like conversation, DELETE IT. Try not to have a character answer a question directly. It’s better to answer a question with a question or to refer to something else.
  7. Using too many adjectives and adverbs: strong writing demands strong nouns and verbs. A verb can be either active or passive. Always choose “active” voice whenever possible.
  8. A noun is put to best use when it paints a definite picture of what you’re trying to say.
  9. Be professional! Making a sale depends on it!

This guest post was contributed by Jacqui Murray. Jacqui is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. She is the author/editor of dozens of books on integrating tech into education, webmaster for six blogs, an Amazon Vine Voice book reviewer, adjunct professor of technology in education, a columnist for Examiner.com and TeachHUB, Editorial Review Board member for Journal for Computing Teachers, monthly contributor to Today’s Author and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. You can find her book at her publisher’s website, Structured Learning.  

His Sacred Vow

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Melanie Kirk discovers the man she’s considered spending her life with was only using her to achieve a means to a selfish end. Abandoned with a baby on the way, she swears never again to be taken in by a guy’s superficial words, or allow any diversions to interfere with her responsibilities.

Taylor Hutchins’s arrival in town couldn’t have come at a worse time. Hoping to stay with his brother & Melanie’s twin sister, Mary, until he finds a place to live, Taylor’s unaware the couple has been unsuccessful in starting a family. Sensitive to both her sister’s plight & the secret attraction she harbors for Taylor, Melanie offers him the guest suite in her home, altho she’s pregnant with another man’s child.

My Review:

I just finished this short two hour romance by Ricci. Ricci writes romance in a way that humor is portrayed throughout. Love at first sight? I believe in love at first sight. This book is romance at it’s best.

This entry was posted on June 12, 2023. 1 Comment

Stopping a Dangerous Revolution

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I provide an in-depth, analytical, and philosophical explanation of why specific cultural and social issues exist. With each topic, I discuss what it is, give examples for each, and break down each example providing more detail of just some of the possible reasons as to why people do them (possible mentalities). I also give some of my own experiences and everything discussed in this book, I have personally witnessed and or have gone thru.

Furthermore, I provide much thought-provoking material to challenge the way we think and view society, in ways you might not have considered. I discuss many unhealthy mentalities and behaviors which is damaging to people on a much larger scale and it’s having a much greater influence on others both directly and indirectly in ways that we do not even realize. This book is something the whole world needs to read as I see the world differently, and the purpose of this book is to share different ways of looking at situations and the numerous possibilities to take into consideration. I share my perception and perspective, viewpoint, mentality, and some of my own philosophies. I provide a more in-depth perspective of looking at a variety of life situations and the possible reasons why people choose to treat others the way they do. I think a lot of people might find this content in general interesting, beneficial, inspiring, and or even life-changing.

My Review:

Having just finished this book, my review follows. Valid points were written about, and many of those are repetitious throughout. The points made and a takeaway since reading gave me pause to reflect on my own life. As textbook style, it’s hard to read in one reading session, which is okay for most people. As a literary piece, I give four stars. The repetitious parts, spelling, punctuation errors, and a huge issue is the use of the word “thru” in this novel. Most writers know that “through” is the only acceptable way writter per any manual written. I still gave four stars for relevant information for those who require this knowledge.

Tears of a Cowgirl

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KATIE FELL IN LOVE WITH THE DEVIL. NOW SHE’S RUNNING FOR HER LIFE.
LOVE CAN BE BLIND, EVEN MISLEADING, BUT LOVE HAS NEVER BEEN SO DANGEROUS!

Katherine is a small-town girl. The day she met Chris, she fell in love. However, love can be deceiving. Their love seemed perfect, but then one day, he changed. Now, Katie and her child are on the run, with Chris hot on their trail.

She runs to the one place Chris would never look… Crash Falls. The town where Katie grew up. Her best friend Charlie swears to protect her, but the devil is resourceful.

As Katie struggles with her past, she discovers a future and learns to trust. The handsome stranger is renting the old Coney house for the winter. There’s something about him that’s far too familiar. Katie and her son end up trapped in a vicious storm, with danger lurking nearby.
She discovers her strength and a new love she never imagined
.

It’s an EMOTIONAL read that’ll have you holding your breath. If you enjoyed Safe Haven & Sleeping with the Enemy, then check out this book.

My Review:

This romance novel is truly heartfelt straight from the heart of the author. Rose has a way of melding characters with a bit of angst, sadness, loss, and true love. When a book pulls on my own heart, then that book speaks volumes. Five stars.

This entry was posted on June 8, 2023. 2 Comments

I Will Find You

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“I WILL FIND YOU” by John Taylor is an inherently riveting tale of mystery and intrigue which starts in wartime Fenland near Ely and then moves halfway across the globe to Australia. Taylor’s story is colourful, poignant and moving as it charts the journey of young Robbie Spalding and his path from a Dr. Barnardos Home in Cambridge to a new life on the other side of the world. Robbie becomes Nick Thorne and this account of his arrival into adulthood is more than a little tragic, as is his eventual search for his mother, and filled with unexpected twists and turns.

Touching, funny, sad and filled with drama, “I Will Find You” is an authentic and engaging read that is both gripping and compelling, and will certainly keep the readers’ earnest attention from beginning to end. Readers should expect to shed a tear for the casualties of war. In the pages of “I Will Find You”, author John Taylor showcases a genuine flair as a novelist for originality, as well as an impressive flair for narrative storytelling.

My Review

I just finished this novel, and I’m shocked by the atrocities that we’re perpetuated upon the kids, even as young as age three to four years of age. Boys Town was something I had heard about, read about, back in the day when the realities spilled forth on both male and female kids. The lascivious behavior and the neglect and torture was worse than anything I’d read back in the day.

Lucy: the Suffragist

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Book Title:                 Lucy

Series:                                     The Art of Secrets Series

Author:                      Vicky Adin

Publication Date:      14 May 2023

Publisher:                   AM Publishing NZ

Page Length:             327

Genre:                                    Dual-timeline historical fiction

Twitter Handle:        @vickyadin @cathiedunn

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Hashtags:       #dualtimeline #historicalfiction #LucyTheSuffragist #WomensRights #BookBlast #BlogTour #TheCoffeePotBookClub

Blog Tour Page:  https://thecoffeepotbookclub.blogspot.com/2023/04/blog-tour-lucy-suffragist-by-vicky-adin.html

Book Title and Author Name:

Lucy

by Vicky Adin

Blurb:

Emma’s curiosity is piqued by a gutsy young climate change campaigner with an antique trinket box full of women’s rights badges, but tracing their history pushes her to her limit.

Struggling to recover from Covid-19, Emma is terrified of developing a chronic and incurable condition and becoming a burden. She tries to ignore her fears and keeps working. She has clients who rely on her. Paige is a spirited environmentalist whose wealthy father tries to curb her enthusiasm. But she is intent on making her mark on the world in spite of him. Emma is torn between untangling the mysteries of Paige’s legacy or saving herself when exhaustion threatens everything she cares about. 

In 1892, twenty-one-year-old Lucy, a dedicated suffragist is determined women shall win the right to vote this time. Since her mother died, she has grown up in the glow of her father’s benevolence. Winning the franchise has become her raison d’être, greater even than her love for Richard. She goes canvassing and is ambushed by a man who undermines her confidence. Conflicted between winning the vote or safeguarding those she loves, she redoubles her campaign efforts. But a moral dilemma puts her future in jeopardy.

A compelling tale of Lucy the suffragist and the courageous women who fought for their right to vote (Book 3 in The Art of Secrets series, dual-timeline sagas about finding your roots).

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This title is available to read on #KindleUnlimited.

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Author Bio:

Vicky Adin’s passion is writing inter-generational sagas inspired by early immigrant women’s stories in New Zealand, linked by journals, letters, photographs, and heirlooms.

As a genealogist and historian, Vicky has combined her skills to write heart-warming novels weaving family life and history together in a way that makes the past come alive.

Delve into the new dual-timeline series, The Art of Secrets, family sagas about finding your roots… or

Become engrossed in The New Zealand Immigrant Collection, suspenseful family saga fiction uncovering the mysteries, the lies and the challenges of the past.

Vicky Adin holds a MA(Hons) in English and Education. She is an avid reader of historical novels, family sagas and contemporary women’s stories and loves to travel.

Social Media Links:

Website:         www.vickyadin.co.nz

Twitter:          https://twitter.com/VickyAdin

Facebook:      https://www.facebook.com/VickyAdinAuthor/

LinkedIn:       https://www.linkedin.com/in/vicky-adin-82b74513/

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Amazon Author Page:                      http://amzn.to/2tUG9co

Goodreads:    https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6543974.Vicky_Adin

This entry was posted on June 1, 2023. 4 Comments

The Devil’s Glove

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Book Title: The Devil’s Glove

Series: Salem

Author: Lucretia Grindle

Publication Date: May 1, 2023

Publisher: Casa Croce Press

Page Length: 346

Genre: Literary Historical Fiction

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Instagram Handle: @bookwhispererink @thecoffeepotbookclub

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Book Title and Author Name:

The Devil’s Glove

by Lucretia Grindle

Blurb:

Northern New England, summer, 1688.
Salem started here.

A suspicious death. A rumor of war. Whispers of witchcraft.

Perched on the brink of disaster, Resolve Hammond and her mother, Deliverance, struggle to survive in their isolated coastal village. They’re known as healers taught by the local tribes – and suspected of witchcraft by the local villagers.

Their precarious existence becomes even more chaotic when summoned to tend to a poisoned woman. As they uncover a web of dark secrets, rumors of war engulf the village, forcing the Hammonds to choose between loyalty to their native friends or the increasingly terrified settler community.

As Resolve is plagued by strange dreams, she questions everything she thought she knew – about her family, her closest friend, and even herself. If the truth comes to light, the repercussions will be felt far beyond the confines of this small settlement.

Based on meticulous research and inspired by the true story of the fear and suspicion that led to the Salem Witchcraft Trials, THE DEVIL’S GLOVE is a tale of betrayal, loyalty, and the power of secrets. Will Resolve be able to uncover the truth before the town tears itself apart, or will she become the next victim of the village’s dark and mysterious past?

Praise for The Devil’s Glove:

“From its opening lines this historical novel from Grindle (Villa Triste) grips with its rare blend of a powerfully evoked past, resonant characters, smart suspense, and prose touched with shivery poetry.”

~ BookLife Reviews Editor’s Pick

WHEN ANGEL’S FLY

Guest Post by Lucretia Grindle, author of The Devil’s Glove

In the brief time since The Devil’s Glove has been published, I have received more questions and comments about one character than about all of the others put together. Abigail Hobbs. I can’t say this surprises me. While the book is centered around Resolve Hammond and her mother, Deliverance, it revolves around Abigail. She is a primary catalyst and change figure, as well as being the uneasy combination of shadow and light most open to interpretation. Is she good? Is she bad? Is she evil? Supernatural? A Bad Cat? Or a child, struggling to survive in a perilous world? I don’t want to attempt to answer any of those questions or to analyse Abigail herself in this post – all of that is, of course, ultimately up to the reader. What I would like to do is discuss some aspects of the challenge, and satisfaction, of writing her as a character.

In many ways, Abigail Hobbs is the kind of gift historical novelists live for. Unlike the more famous Abigail (Williams) who was one of the main accusers, Abigail Hobbs was a fairly peripheral, if completely unique, figure in the drama-rama that became the Salem trials. She was barely fourteen when she was named by her peer group of mostly teen-aged girls, many of whom she had known for years, as one of the earliest accused witches.

This alone sets her apart. Mercy Lewis, a distant cousin, grew up with her. Susannah Sheldon almost certainly knew her. And they were sure she was a witch, or – something. So was pretty much everyone else she’d ever encountered, including her poor stepmother who, when questioned, stated plaintively that she would never have married into the Hobbs family if she had ‘known that she would have to cope with Such a One.’ Her father more or less said he was afraid of her, when he said anything at all. Abigail had that effect on people.

Oh yes, she said quite happily, when challenged by the po-faced Salem magistrates, she wandered alone in the woods. All the time. Mostly at night. She agreed, quite matter of factly, that she probably did fly. Then added that she was sorry if she inadvertently stuck pins in any one. She didn’t mean to. It was all, she explained without being asked, due the fact that four years earlier, she had ‘signed the black man’s book,’ one summer afternoon when they happened to meet up in the forest. After that, she’d promised to do everything he asked of her, so that probably explained the pins. When one of the magistrates finally recovered enough to speak, Abigail agreed that, yes, all things considered, she guessed she was a witch. It was unfortunate, she supposed, and she was sorry if it had caused any trouble, but what could she do? She had, after all, given the Black Man her word, and good girls kept their word, didn’t they? The startled magistrates then listened in silence as Abigail calmly elaborated on the details of witchdom, including the snack menu at demonic meetings, which was usually bread and cheese. Something she seemed to find a bit disappointing, considering.

Thanks to the 17th century mania for record keeping, and the extraordinary good luck that makes the Essex County Massachusetts archive one of the most complete and intact in the world, we have a fairly accurate record of who said, and occasionally did, what in Salem village and town in 1692. So we know that as Abigail spoke on that April afternoon, an uncharacteristic silence fell over the Salem village meeting house. The startled accusers couldn’t even bring themselves to fall on the floor or mutter about yellow birds, much less scream or point fingers. Their stunned silence might be interpreted as fear. Or admiration. Or possibly both. As for the magistrates, by the time Abigail Hobbs was finished they were equal parts bemused and horrified. Having no idea what else to do, they threw the entire family in jail. This was manna from heaven. And it got better.

As I looked into the history of the Hobbs family, it was hard not to come to the conclusion that they were simply unfortunate. Deciding to make their own way in the world, William and Avis Hobbs separated from their families in Watertown shortly after they were married and struck out for Topsfield, Massachusetts, where they acquired a small farm. At first they did well enough. Then, little by little, things began to fall apart. William never managed to get elected to town office. The farm survived but did not thrive. Avis had a son, then twins, then in 1678 a daughter, whom they called Abigail.

More mouths to feed did not make things better. By the mid-1680s, The Hobbs decided that they would be better off letting their farm to tenants and trying to make a new start in The Eastward. By the mid to late 17th century, Maine, then called The Eastward, had developed the sort of reputation that Alaska has today. It was where you went to start over; a hard, even perilous place but one where people were less likely to ask questions. Who you had been did not matter as much as it did in hide-bound Boston or increasingly cosmopolitan Salem. What you could do was mattered. Unfortunately, William Hobbs couldn’t do much for long, except drink.

Shortly after the Hobbs’ arrival in the settlement of Falmouth, which was about as far north as you could go at the time, the eldest son left to join the militia. Like most families, William, Avis and their children farmed a few acres on the outskirts, and lived close to the fort. They rented a house from the owner of The Ordinary, the village tavern where William, having failed yet again to make his mark in town politics, spent increasing amounts of time. Then, sometime in 1686, the twins drowned. No details of their deaths are recorded, but it is hard to avoid the sense that in some profound way, it broke the family. Or perhaps it just broke Avis’s heart. She died in the summer of 1688, leaving behind an absent son, a drunken husband and ten year old Abigail.

1688. Four years before Salem. The year Madockawando and the Abenaki Confederacy decided northern settlement had gone far enough. The year the militia came to Falmouth, attacked a fishing camp, took hostages, and sent them to Boston to be sold as slaves. The year London imploded and the Stuarts went into exile and half a world away King William’s war – a conflagration that would empty The Eastward – got started. The year Boston hung an Irish washerwoman for bewitching a group of children living in the house of a Divine called Cotton Mather. The year Abigail Hobbs said she went into the forest and signed the black man’s book.

The scaffolding of disaster that hovered around Abigail, combined with her own bizarre testimony, made her a character that was almost too good to be true. Not least because, apart from her dramatic bit part in the early days of the Salem Trials, not much is known about Her. We know about her family and about the circumstances that must have shaped her – but of the girl herself, little to nothing. In short, she was the sort of ‘gap’ in history, the kind of tantalizing glimpse and suggested shape, historical novelists dream of. Even better, at the time The Devil’s Glove takes place, in that long hot summer of 1688, she was a child.

Children are powerful precisely because they are in the process of coming into being. Their edges are not yet hardened, their moral codes not yet set. They are vessels for all the expectations, and delusions, all the wishful thinking of the adult world. Including innocence. I had long wanted to write all of that: the power, the evolution, the goodness, the badness, and mostly the knowingness that children carry within them. And I was fascinated by Abigail’s own assertions of what she thought had happened to her, and what she thought she was.

I don’t know how to answer a lot of the questions about Abigail Hobbs. In writing her, I tried to catch something of the power of her personality that one senses, still lingering in the archive that records that April day in Salem, 1692.

And this, to me, is the real beauty of historical fiction: the opportunity every once in a while, to glimpse in the historical record a vivid, almost vanishing figure. To have the chance to catch them by the hem, and – if not drag them back – invite them to stay a little and raise all the questions about who they are, and why, and how they did what they did. In short, to ask them to linger, and live a little while on the page. Not all of them agree. But Abigail did, and I am profoundly grateful.

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Lucretia Grindle grew up and went to school and university in England and the United States. After a brief career in journalism, she worked for The United States Equestrian Team organizing ‘kids and ponies,’ and for the Canadian Equestrian Team. For ten years, she produced and owned Three Day Event horses that competed at The World Games, The European Games and the Atlanta Olympics. In 1997, she packed a five mule train across 250 miles of what is now Grasslands National Park on the Saskatchewan/Montana border tracing the history of her mother’s family who descend from both the Sitting Bull Sioux and the first officers of the Canadian Mounties.

Returning to graduate school as a ‘mature student’, Lucretia completed an MA in Biography and Non-Fiction at The University of East Anglia where her work, FIREFLIES, won the Lorna Sage Prize. Specializing in the 19th century Canadian West, the Plains Tribes, and American Indigenous and Women’s History, she is currently finishing her PhD dissertation at The University of Maine.

Lucretia is the author of the psychological thrillers, THE NIGHTSPINNERS, shortlisted for the Steel Dagger Award, and THE FACES of ANGELS, one of BBC FrontRow’s six best books of the year, shortlisted for the Edgar Award. Her historical fiction includes, THE VILLA TRISTE, a novel of the Italian Partisans in World War II, a finalist for the Gold Dagger Award, and THE LOST DAUGHTER, a fictionalized account of the Aldo Moro kidnapping. She has been fortunate enough to be awarded fellowships at The Hedgebrook Foundation, The Hawthornden Foundation, The Hambidge Foundation, The American Academy in Paris, and to be the Writer in Residence at The Wallace Stegner Foundation. A television drama based on her research and journey across Grasslands is currently in development. THE DEVIL’S GLOVE and the concluding books of THE SALEM TRILOGY are drawn from her research at The University of Maine where Lucretia is grateful to have been a fellow at the Canadian American Foundation.

She and her husband, David Lutyens, live in Shropshire.

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