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EDITING 101: 30 – Ellipses…
Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog
Originally posted as the Dun Writin’—Now Whut? series on this blog, EDITING 101 is a weekly refresher series for some of you and brand new for others.
Courtesy of Adirondack Editing
Ellipses
Ahh, another point of grammar that’s frequently either overused or incorrectly used. And, in this case, it’s understandable! There are so many different ways to use ellipses.
First, we’ll start with the punctuation mark itself. Some authors use three dots in a row…which Microsoft Word will typically convert into an ellipsis character. An ellipsis character only takes up one character space, and can be deleted by backspacing one time. This ellipsis is scrunched together more than if there were simply three period/full stop marks.
Other authors like to use a space in between . . . like this. It’s spread out more and I think it looks nicer. The problem is when it comes at the end of a sentence…
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Do you know how to kill off a character?
Picking a way to kill off a character is not always easy.
I’m dealing with that now. I’ve got a character that’s got to go and another that may need to make an untimely exit.
Hmm, poison might work.
If you’re looking for a nasty poison then you will be as thrilled as I was to find Poisoning People for Fun and Profit by Anne R. Allen.
Anne gives us 25 poisons to choose from in a series of posts.
Want to find a poison for your WIP?
Click and start with her latest, Poisoning People for Fun and Profit: Part 25—Yew, and then work your way through the rest.
Have you ever used poison as a way to rid your story of a character?
Which one did you choose?
Or do you prefer something more violent ?
Leave me a comment – I love comments.
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The dispossessed
Why Reviewing Books is an Act of Love

Whenever I finish a book and prepare a review, I ask myself why I am doing this. Why I dedicate time reading books and time writing reviews and even more time structuring the blog post. Do you know how many times I revise a post before it goes public? Too many times. Some of the posts you love the most have been revised upwards to twenty times because I want it to be done to the best of my ability. It may not even be done right but at least I know I’ve done what I can. If I think before I speak then it means that I must also think before I write. Of course, typos fall through but the point is that to prepare and schedule a post takes time. So, after days (sometimes weeks and months) reading the book, hours writing the review and a few hours…
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360-Degree Panoramic Photos Celebrate the Majestic Beauty of Grand Libraries
Is Your Prose Too Beautiful?
Writing your first novel-Things you should know
I ran into this question while doing some research this past week, and it made me stop and think. Is my prose to beautiful? In my case, I would say no. I never grasped that concept. I have to admit I’ve tried.
The most famous rule in the bible of writing hints, The Elements of Style, is “Omit Needless Words.” This should be the hallmark of every writer.
Some authors believe good language should be showy. However, using unnecessary words in an effort to be literary or write more beautifully, is a common error first-time authors make.
George Simenon, a Belgian author, once pointed to a sentence and said: “That’s a beautiful sentence, cut it.”
He explained: “When you come across such a gorgeous sentence in a paragraph, it stands out and disrupts the even tone of your narrative. It’s as if you’ve paved a road and had…
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Our Lady of Victory: The Saga Of An African-American Catholic Community

Our Lady of Victory: The Saga Of An African-American Catholic Community
By Shirley Harris Slaughter
My review follows the book blurb found on Amazon
“One act set in motion a chain of events that threatened one Catholic community’s ability to thrive.
It happened between 1945 and 1946 at the headquarters of the Archdiocese of Detroit in the Chancellor’s office. Msgr. John C. Ryan called an emergency meeting with the cardinal…
And so the stage was set for the years of turmoil that followed and the subsequent demise of this once vibrant church. Here comes the author who gives the reader an intimate look at her church, the township she grew up in, and its historical significance to World War II, Henry Ford’s auto plant, migration from the south, and the housing crisis that was unfolding.
The reader is introduced to the pioneers of this West Eight Mile Community who helped shape and establish this community that shaped her. But the book takes a different turn as the research uncovers forgotten secrets…
Today (2014) this little church is in danger of closing its physical doors forever!! Stay tuned as this story continues to unfold.”
I found Our Lady of Victory: The Saga of an African-American Catholic Community by Shirley Harris Slaughter an interesting historical book. The amount of racial prejudice is horrible and shocking! Slaughter compiled an enormous amount of historical content and this content comprises most of this novel. The pieces in which she wove in her own memories created a look at her humanity from a different perspective than most. This isn’t meant to degrade the author; rather, I simply want others to take notice of her struggles, those of her relatives, her community and her church. Slaughter is rich in her own humanity. I feel this book is more fitting as a historical piece rather than a memoir. I highly recommend this book.
M. Schmidt aka S. Jackson, Author, When Angels Fly
Review: Fat Girl, Skinny by Amye Archer

Review: Fat Girl, Skinny by Amye Archer
My review of this book follows the authors’ blurb found on Amazon.
“After her husband leaves her for a skinnier, blonder, younger woman, Amye is forced to confront the food addiction that has been holding her back for most of her life and has left her weighing two hundred and sixty-five pounds. With the help of the gang of girls of Weight Watchers, and their fearless leader —former fatty and community college dropout—Pantsuit Pam, Amye spends the next year losing weight and learning to live in a skinny (er) woman’s body. Only being skinny is not as easy as it looks, especially when inside, she will always be a fat girl. Fat Girl, Skinny is Amye’s story, but it’s also the story of anyone who has ever been told: “You’d be pretty…if”.”
Not only has Archer written a book dealing with issues of obesity, she has woven a book encompassing her own inner thoughts and feelings, and leads the reader into the feelings of others in similar situations. Food addiction is real in the western world, and with it comes extreme self-loathing and food disorders, such as bulimia, and starvation. Archer bares her soul on her journey to rebuild her life, to believe in herself once again, to lay open her bullied younger self, along with coping mechanisms of alcohol and boys. Food addiction is a vicious cycle in trying to attain metabolic sobriety, and it undermines attempts at gaining this sobriety. For memoir lovers, this is a great memoir full of honesty and deep with humanity. Heads up: this memoir contains sexually explicit scenes.
Although acquaintances may be many…

Wednesday, July 3, 2002
Although acquaintances may be many, and true friends they may be
few, counted on one hand are good folk like you.

