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Just Stay by Michelle Abbott

JustStay

I read this novel and my review follows Abbott’s Amazon Blurb.

“The last place Pia wants to be is on a family vacation in a sleepy Cornish village. She’s anticipating two weeks of mind-numbing boredom. Then she meets Trey, a local boy. He’s absolutely gorgeous. The trouble is — he knows it. He’s arrogant and egotistical, and Pia intends  to avoid him at all costs. 

But Trey is not the kind of guy who gives up easily. When he sets his sights on Pia, her resistance is futile. 

It’s just a holiday romance, some light-hearted fun, right? But one of them is about to discover that still waters do, indeed, run deep. When what lurks beneath the surface finally erupts, the consequences may prove to be catastrophic. 

For ages 17+ due to sexual content and strong language.”

I think this is a YA story, but in most ways it’s really an adult novel due to the x-rated scenes and dialogue.  Pia’s character was child-like and then adult. Reading about an unexpected love with Trey, on a family vacation was nice. I wasn’t impressed by the blatant graphic sex scenes. I do like a little sex and innuendo in the romances I read, but not graphic sex.

Trey’s nickname for Pia is demeaning and not one that elicits a sense of sweet love. Both Pia and Trey acted like young teenagers and not ‘adultish’ a great part of the time. The flow is fast in places and the ending is somewhat dark, but you aren’t left with a cliff hanger.

Personality Types and Writers

Mae Clair's avatarStory Empire

Are writers introverts? So many of us say we are, but personality tests show that how we view ourselves is not always how others view us. I’ve been subjected to a number of personality and team-building profiles in the business world and I always find them interesting.

Many years ago I took a detailed Myers-Brigg test conducted by my local college. If you’re unfamiliar with Myers-Brigg, it’s based on the foundation that there are sixteen personality types which are factored from four key elements:

Favorite World
Do you focus on the outer world (Extraversion • E) or the inner world (Introversion • I)

Information
Do you focus on the basic information you take in (Sensing • S) or do you interpret and add meaning (Intuition • N)

Decisions
Do you look at logic and consistency first (Thinking • T) or people and special circumstances (Feeling • F)

Structure
When…

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Nightmares

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Nightmares

Nightmares ~ are they real? If so, how close to reality? What is reality in a nightmare? What do they mean?

This is about true nightmares and not déjà vu. (That’s a whole different story.)

I had a nightmare last night, in color, vivid, vibrant, you name it and it was there in my dream. I was awake and running after my boys, trying to save them from something in my peripheral, an evil I couldn’t really see, yet I knew it was there and real. The closer I got to my boys, the further away they were from me. Both boys were running as hard as they could, and I saw on their faces sheer terror, which terrified me further. I wasn’t able to save them and I don’t know what happened to them. Never did I fully awake from this nightmare, either. I was shaken to my very innermost core.

What is the significance of my nightmare? Any guesses? In working on my memoir in the past, I never once had a nightmare such as this one, and I hope I never have another one.

Thoughts are appreciated.

© Mary Schmidt 10 May 2017

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Scripture

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And they said, Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ, and thou shalt be saved, and thy house. –Acts 16:31

There’s An Indie Publishing Gold Rush, And Guess Who’s Making A Killing?

Tara Sparling's avatarTara Sparling writes

There's A Gold Rush In Indie Publishing, And Guess Who's Making A Killing Pulling The Plug On My Pride

One of the basic tenets of my early childhood education – mostly in the schoolyard rather than the classroom, if truth be told – was that “self-praise is no praise”. These words were particularly powerful where I came from, but it’s really a general Irish thing. Boasting is second only in social torts to not buying your round in the pub. Both are punishable by flogging, ostracization, and eventual death. Fact.

But the internet is a perilous place. It’s full of braggarts, self-aggrandisement, and general preening and strutting. It becomes infectious. One minute you’re sneering at someone’s humblebrag, the next you find yourself telling the world how SURPRISED you were that some YouTube star liked the photo you put up of the dinner you said took you 25 minutes to prepare, when in reality you spent three hours on it.

I Should Have Known Better

So there I was last Sunday week, merrily congratulating myself, telling myself I’d just had a GENIUS…

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A smile…

rhythminlife's avatarRhythm In Life

sunflower-1281086_1920 A reflection of our hearts;

Words unsaid…

of,

Comfort and confidence

Belief and courage

 Assurance.

A smile;

A tale of a child loved

A tale of a thankful mother

A tale of a life time friendship

A tale of two hearts tangled.

The best way to say,

I am loved

I am at peace

Content

Full

And I am thankful…

A smile.

Susan McMillan

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#amwriting: creating intimacy: Point of View

conniejjasperson's avatarLife in the Realm of Fantasy

Narration is the use of a written or spoken commentary to convey a story to an audience. Wikipedia explains that a narrative consists of three components:

  • Narrative point of view: the perspective (or type of personal or non-personal “lens”) through which a story is communicated.

  • Narrative voice: the format (or type presentational form) through which a story is communicated.

  • Narrative time: the grammatical placement of the story’s time-frame in the past, the present, or the future.

We want to create a sense of intimacy, of being in the character’s head. One way to do that is to use stream of consciousness, a narrative mode that offers a first-person perspective by attempting to replicate the thought processes as well as the actions and spoken words of the narrative character.

This device incorporates interior monologues and inner desires or motivations, as well as pieces of incomplete thoughts that are expressed to the audience but…

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10 Do Not’s of Writing Etiquette

Steven Capps's avatarBard & Books

Most of this post is focused on how writers should behave but is only my opinion. If you think something different, completely disagree, or think it’s pretentious for me to spout guidelines about how people should act, that is perfectly fine and is one of my rules.

In other news, I noticed I am pretty close to 300 WordPress followers, so once you are done, I’d really appreciate it if you hit the little button at the bottom of this page. Be warned, you will likely get updates on rants, stuff I have seen in the slush pile, and my general thoughts on the publishing industry. I tend to heavily slant toward traditional publishing (since I am an Associate Editor at a PodCastle) but occasionally I’ll have guests representing self-publishing and small press.

10 Do Not’s of Writing Etiquette

pexels-photo-1724911. People can have different opinions. This doesn’t make them stupid…

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