Ingredients for Storytelling: Details

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Welcome back to my Ingredients for Storytelling series where I will be talking about some of my favorite elements of great stories both on the page and onscreen. As you can see from the title, today’s post will be dedicated to discussing how details can often enrich an already strong storyline.

Why do details matter in the first place?

1. Setting: In my experience as an avid reader and viewer, details about the world characters inhabit as well as details about the characters themselves can make the story itself more relatable and believable to the audience. Take for example, the wide film genre of anime. Anime does an enchanting job of taking ordinary scenes from our everyday lives and re-illustrating them in such a way as to make them seem like beautiful landscapes (e.g. a rainy street corner, the inside of a crowded train station). Yet what makes them so…

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6 Shitty WordPress Hacks (That Actually Work)

The Shining Gem's avatarThe Shining Gem

By the end of this post, you will hate me for doing this and kick yourself for not thinking of this earlier.

  1. Always leave likes, no matter what! Doesn’t matter if you read the post or not, the mere fact that you laid your eyes on it warrants a like. Just make sure you don’t like a lot of the same person’s posts in succession, that would make you look like a tool. Just like a couple of posts and move on, that’s enough to get your name on that coveted notifications list and also to suggest that you read the posts.
  2. The above point has a drawback though. After a few “like campaigns” WordPress temporarily bans you from liking any posts for a few hours but there’s a workaround to this. Do the good ol’ blog hopping and start liking comments. This is a bit of a danger area…

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Are Those Mistakes Jumping Off The Page?

Writing your first novel-Some things you should know's avatarWriting your first novel-Things you should know

the-trained-eyeI’ve been taking an on-line course that is suppose to help me become a standout writer. Knowledge is power. I spend as much time reading as I do writing, and I’ve learned a lot. Mainly, I’ve become more aware of my own writing. I also notice things in other peoples writing. I use to enjoy reading for pleasure, and I still do, but I see errors that I never noticed before. I guess I’m turning into an editor 🙂

You can’t improve if you don’t see the errors you are making. You would think something like the overuse of certain word: adjectives, adverbs, and one of my favorite- ‘ing words’ would jump out at you, but they don’t.

If you follow my blogs, you know I have a problem with the words ‘had’ and ‘so’.  There may be others at times, but these are definitely the most obvious. You probably…

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How “Also Bought” Can Help You Sell More Books

Nicholas C. Rossis's avatarNicholas C. Rossis

written word media logo | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksRicci Wolman of Written Word Media recently published a detailed post on “Also Boughts.” As the post explains, Amazon is using every trick to increase sales. A particularly powerful one is Also Boughts; the list of items people who bought something also bought.

Examples:

  • People who buy baby formula also buy Diapers
  • People who buy a bathing suit also buy suntan lotion
  • People who bought Jurrasic Park by Michael Crighton also bought Ready Player One by Ernest Cline

You see this play out all over the Amazon website in the Also Bought items that appear on every product page on Amazon.

How Can This Help Your Book?

First of all, you want to make sure your “Also Boughts” are aligned with your specific genre so your book is targeted toward the right kind of reader.

A common mistake (from Amazon’s point of view) people make is to ask friends…

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Do you focus on the eyes to see the character?

Jean M. Cogdell's avatarJean's Writing

Do you believe the eyes are windows to the soul?

Whether you believe this cliché or not, eyes are important. How you describe the eyes of a character can reveal a lot to the reader.

“Eyes that sparkled like sapphires glanced my way.”

This sentence tells us only that the person is blue-eyed.

BUT…

“Cold, blue eyes locked with mine. A chill rippled down my spine.” 

Tells us the character has blue eyes and may be dangerous.

“Her blue gaze froze me in place.”

Lets us know the character is a woman and she ain’t happy.

“Lines crinkled at the corners of her sapphire eyes as they danced with mischief.”

This last one, again indicates the character is a woman and she may be laughing at or with another character.

If a body part is as important as William Shakespeare contended, we need to make certain our readers see into the heart…

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3 Pieces of Advice No Writer Should Ever Forget – by J.C. Wolfe…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

Writing is incredibly rewarding, but it can also be extremely challenging.

Every artist is unique and every writer has their reasons for wanting to write, yet there are some pieces of advice that hold true for all creative spirits.

Whenever you find yourself at a low point, reminding yourself of this advice may be the motivation you need to get back to writing!

So for those of you who so nobly chose to be writers, there are three pieces of advice you should never forget.

Enjoy, and stay motivated!

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Blurbs for Non-fiction Books – Guest Post by Jaq D Hawkins…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

Do you write books on a non-fiction subject?

My first published books were in the Mind, Body, Spirit category, which whether you believe in the subject matter or not, counts as non-fiction because fiction is of course story-telling rather than imparting information. I’m in the process of re-releasing the material in those early books after the demise of the publisher and new blurb writing is in order.

All that aside, writing a blurb for a non-fiction book is different from writing one for a story, though writing for one non-fiction topic is very similar to writing the blurb for any subject.

The primary function of the non-fiction blurb is to impart information; what is the book about? What has the author got to say to readers about the subject? What qualifies the author to pontificate on the subject at all?

I find that the last point is usually best handled…

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Uploading your Self-Publishing Paperback to KDP Print

Claire Bayley's avatarPlaisted Formatting & Genealogy

We all know that KDP Print is likely to be taking over from Createspace when they finally close their doors (after all we’ve seen go on in the last 12 mth) I thought it would be good to do a presentation for those who wish to use KDP Print.

In the early days, I heard a lot of complaints.  Their book cover wrap kept rejecting book covers which Createspace always accepted. There were no Author priced copies, the author was paying the same as any other customer… etc.

Needless to say they have slowly improved as the last 12 mths progressed. People are happier with their service. I have just put up my first book to see what all the fuss is about and so I can give this presentation to you all.  

How it Works

PAPERBACK DETAILS

KDP Paper1

As you can see from the above image you need to…

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Got WordPress Woes?

christineplouvier's avatarIRISH FIREBRANDS: A Novel ~ and Other Works by Christine Plouvier, Indie Author

Im WordPress nichts Neues.*

Scuttlebutt has it that horrible things are happening (or are about to happen) to the functionality of the Blog Host We All So Admire. This should be no news to those of us who have been blogging here for the past 5 years (as I have), or even longer.

Some bloggers are particularly irate about what they have experienced as a discoverability problem associated with the WordPress search engine. People who commented at one such blog also said they were having trouble finding the blogger in question. The universal conclusion was a “broken WordPress search engine.”

Many bloggers may not have much knowledge about the intricacies of computer technology because they’re “users” (people who are not, and never have been, “programmers,” no matter how many years they may have had computers in their work or personal lives). They never even dabble in HTML, and are content…

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